Thread:Ketsunen/@comment-12719-20180504175347

Hey first of all thanks for adding to the plot sections!

I want to suggest that for internal consistency, the plot section should either use "Ryō and Arata", or "Yoake and Kaizaki", instead of "Yoake and Arata".


 * "Ryō and Arata" would be a more "localized" writing style that matches English language habits (using first name across the board).
 * "Yoake and Kaizaki" would match the dominant usage of names in the story. Yoake and Onoya only say "Arata" when they are acting in front of other students, and they call him "Kaizaki-san" in monologues and in private conversations.  That leaves Oga as the only person (among the core characters) who actually calls the protagonist "Arata".  The author herself also refer to the core characters by their last names.

I'm fine with either style, and I think different sections can use different styles due to varying considerations
 * for the Synopsis section I tend to use the "localized" writing style because I want to feel more English-friendly with that section
 * for the Trivia section I tend to write with the "dominant usage" (after using the full name at least once)

I can't come up with a model explaining usage of "Yoake and Arata" though.

Your thoughts? 